[yvonne]

The first one you list isn't haiku (5-7-5).

The second one is not only not iambic pentameter, but it's not even iambic. The phrase "his conservative" throws off the meter.

[yvonne]

The first one you list isn't haiku (5-7-5).

The second one is not only not iambic pentameter, but it's not even iambic. The phrase "his conservative" throws off the meter.

[yvonne]

The first one you list isn't haiku (5-7-5).

The second one is not only not iambic pentameter, but it's not even iambic. The phrase "his conservative" throws off the meter.

[yvonne]

The first one you list isn't haiku (5-7-5).

The second one is not only not iambic pentameter, but it's not even iambic. The phrase "his conservative" throws off the meter.

[stupac2]

You know, I never bothered to check, just assumed that if he posted them they'd be haiku.

[stupac2]

You know, I never bothered to check, just assumed that if he posted them they'd be haiku.

[stupac2]

You know, I never bothered to check, just assumed that if he posted them they'd be haiku.

[stupac2]

You know, I never bothered to check, just assumed that if he posted them they'd be haiku.