[Hank 91]

The English teacher in me demands that I point out we're not looking for a haiku. Here's the original...

so much depends
on

a red wheel
barrow

glazed with rain
water

beside the white
chickens


Now here's a reworking:

so much depends
on

a five-star
freshman

showered with true
accolades

beside his talented
teammates

[Hank 91]

The English teacher in me demands that I point out we're not looking for a haiku. Here's the original...

so much depends
on

a red wheel
barrow

glazed with rain
water

beside the white
chickens


Now here's a reworking:

so much depends
on

a five-star
freshman

showered with true
accolades

beside his talented
teammates