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Re: For the creative among us - yvonne - 03-29-2013
The first one you list isn't haiku (5-7-5).
The second one is not only not iambic pentameter, but it's not even iambic. The phrase "his conservative" throws off the meter.
Re: For the creative among us - yvonne - 03-29-2013
The first one you list isn't haiku (5-7-5).
The second one is not only not iambic pentameter, but it's not even iambic. The phrase "his conservative" throws off the meter.
Re: For the creative among us - stupac2 - 03-30-2013
You know, I never bothered to check, just assumed that if he posted them they'd be haiku.
Re: For the creative among us - stupac2 - 03-30-2013
You know, I never bothered to check, just assumed that if he posted them they'd be haiku.